Update: May 8th, 2010
First, some disclaimers.
I do not own any concept or idea behind certain skills, spells or summons. The credit for that will fall almost-solely to the creators of the Final Fantasy series. Others will fall to the creators of .Hack, Kingdom Hearts, and possibly Wild Arms.
Also, there will likely be references or concepts tied to Harry Potter, Katekyo Hitman Reborn!, and other anime and books that slip my mind.
The entire Aitelorn clan (Nerion, Yula, Phiol, Rityu and Stein) and certain characters that have yet to appear are characters created by Tsu.
Karyme Doyle, who has yet to make an appearance, is Okie's character.
The plot, Seloria and Kairi Thyride, and certain characters that has yet to appear, however, are solely mine.
Also, the story is being beta'd by Okie. The entire writing process, though, is solely me.
Update: May 6th, 2010
After getting some critique I very much needed from a friend (I agree with her, I'm too much in RP mode), the chapters are now being rewritten. The next chapter will not be up until all four chapters are revamped.
Sorry for that, and please wait for the very much more reader-friendly chapters (in terms of character understanding, for those who don't know them) to come up!
Good for you, by accepting constructive ones with an open mind goes a long way. But those who spam and trying to be a nuisance should be condemn and ignore.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up.